Description: Yeah, this is like a combination of my history and sociology classes, and I guess kind of a bit about my life. I'm slowly learning the last two lines, but it's hard.
Never Ending -------------------------------------------
Mr. Thomas Hobbes coined the thought of
Power after Power
Establishing the first glass ceiling
With no limitation on happiness
And no restriction on pain
Soon began the search of the
"American Dream"
Believing that they would have it all
Fame, perfection, the white picket fence
But not taking into consideration
Individuality
Or personal limitations
Marriage, 2.4 kids and a dog
The American Ideal
But is not always possible
The conquest for success is continual
Success is similar to beauty
It lies in the beholder
Well, nice write.... though it sounds more like prose rather than poetry. I concur with everything it was said.... the American dream being nothing else than bull[censored] and all, the pathetic picket fence.... ect ... as to the last two lines.... I find it also hard myself....
hey nice poem. Definately sound smore like a story. To me it's sounds like it's all about the american dream and ther persute to happiness. Sucess is always a good thing something I dream about myself is the american dream. The house the cars the wife and kids. Kinda like pleasant ville. -james
Submission Name: Never Ending
