Description: Is this literal? It could be about our border collie, who can't be embarrassed (b'coz y'all won't tell him you read about him, will you?)
Or it could be teen angst, or even political. HAHAHA!
When Alpha male brought you home for me
O! Leaping, thrashing furry goodness
I was compelled to rip open
your wild thing heart
To empty it-a sopping vulgar husk
At that moment a novel feeling,
a tickling in the balls
How glorious! I must...
Virgin ape, two stimulating shades of red
With inattentive lips and
George Bush eyes
Object of my teenage dog lust
I make you mine
with ragged breathing
Mine with urgent focus
a furtive crouch
a frustrated positioning
I make you nasty as a crackhouse couch
I am rather lost in this one as well. This was really a maze of metaphors for me. I can't determine the humor in it. I can't really cypher it. I enjoyed reading it. I just feel that it needs a little bit more of a clear definition.
Well I guess I have the true insight on this piece. Don't worry hunnie i ain't telling unless they beg... a little. Typical piece expanding your boundless ability and wordsmythery. I don't mean typical in a negative sense, but typical in the caliber of poetic ability I hope to one day emulate.
Well I aint sure what this is either ma dear, but its frustrating as heck...goes from a sexual tone to a political point and has a possessiveness quality to it in some fashion. Either way, it did somehow manage to tickle my balls enough for me to comment on it, though I am not sure if it was a good type of tickle or a bad one, HA! Alright, that sums it up, this one left me just as confused as you seem to be with it, but thats the beauty of it, ya know? Way to keep me thinking. Have a good one and keep smilin'