Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: ANNdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: layDsayD
    ASL Info:    29/f/florida
    Elite Ratio:    3.16 - 264/243/147
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 641
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 623



    Description:
       have you ever met someone who just inspires you and you cant put your finger on why that is true of my eaer freind ann i saw her last night and had to write about it hmmm not dsure why anyway here it is


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsANNdots
    -------------------------------------------



    Ann’s hands seem too small to have felt so much .
    She is to fragile to harbor such strength
    I am convinced she feels the worlds weight more than most.
    Like she holds up her life with just her finger.
    I cant explain her innocent light.
    Its like a soothing glow from a child’s nursery.
    She cant see her eyes the way he does.
    I can tell she is unsettled by it.
    Blow the dust from the pages.
    Brush the hair from her cheek
    She’s there silently waiting
    Ever-present
    Take a deep breathe and read .
    In deepest dedication :A.L.F.




    Submitted on 2005-08-25 19:17:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      Sounds like a person who has tasted most things in life. Nice to se a really good poem of dedication to someone who you obviously look to and admire - well done.
    | Posted on 2005-08-26 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      this was a nice thing to do dedicating a poem to someone whos inspired you so much. you really should show this to her. she sounds like one of those people whos been through so much in her life but is still standing strong. not a lot of people can do that either cuz some times certain events tear people apart. anyways this was very nice and im sure she would like this if she read it. nicely done on this!


    brenna
    | Posted on 2005-08-25 00:00:00 | by Day DreaMeR | [ Reply to This ]
      wow wut a dedication..i hope you show this to her so she can see just how special she is in ur eyes..she but b awesome tho cuz the way you describe makes her sound as tho shes had some tough times
    | Posted on 2005-08-25 00:00:00 | by scardnscared | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    71990

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    A Sonnet for Nina written by SavedDragon
    One Thing written by Wolfwatching
    Bond written by saartha
    To the King written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Still Fighting See? written by ForgottenGraves
    Pressure written by hybridsongwrite
    102.3 written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Sunset written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Be Free written by hybridsongwrite
    Our Cinder Crisis written by SavedDragon
    In My Head written by faideddarkness
    Skin of Fables written by ShadowParadox
    cleverly shunned written by CrypticBard
    It's Night Now written by RisingSon
    To written by SavedDragon
    Transparent written by Daniel Barlow
    This written by Chelebel
    Once Again written by krs3332003
    Whiteout written by layDsayD
    Munyonyo written by expiring_touch
    untitled written by Chelebel
    In the Mouth of Elysium written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Summer Nights written by ollie_wicked
    Treasure Chest written by PieceOfCake
    Giving written by jjd
    What happens written by Wolfwatching
    Wasps written by Wolfwatching
    new moon written by CrypticBard
    4th of July written by layDsayD
    I will call out your name written by RisingSon

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry