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    dots Submission Name: Dsyde: Stronger than Blooddots
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    Author: solemnpen
    ASL Info:    18
    Elite Ratio:    4.02 - 303/339/42
    Words: 234
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 905
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1382



    Description:
       We got some people going through some thangs
    So i figured i'd let the pen sang
    A rope made of many strands
    But we aint gonna fold
    I hope e'erbody understands


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    dotsDsyde: Stronger than Blooddots
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    Time to get on a more serious note
    we got baggage everybody got problems
    but let a bitch think we playing
    and thats when the pen cuts the throat

    A high note to swing high in this ghetto clouds
    in a 24 karat babychair
    still at 15 im the baby pit
    check the tat, and you tell me who i am wit

    hearing em talk bout blood brothers what the fuck is that
    dsyde intwined in the soul, spread out and about
    "fuck dem other niggas"
    we still bring it like dat
    You aint no soldier if you cant feel
    You aint a ryder if time can't heal
    Love in this context, war between minds
    you better check this text, if you think we weak, no rhyme
    It's a crime, the shit p goes through
    Its a shame that troy has to play the favorites game
    Domestic or Obsessed
    If you aint seeing, you aint believing... whos fault is that?
    dsyde baby holla for me brack, ra ta tat tat
    The solemn one was almost gone
    He was almost erased, gone from his home
    Found me a rock in dem 2 soldiers
    That now got me breaking nonstop on these hoes
    Inspired to write, Inspired to do my will
    We still holding on, Almost gone
    But not down
    Another Dsyde episode that shows
    The bitches we real




    Submitted on 2005-08-25 23:24:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      aiiyo, straight up, i think u are what we are, FAM. you have the greatest grasp of what we are and what we aspire to be i guess. Dsyde is 4 years strong and we ain't close to stoppin. holla atcha boy, circa 05, remember that. darksyde 4 life. there is no talkin back, we heart attacks, we hit you in the chest, we the best, we rep till sun sets keep us from finding our nest, in which case, we'll switch faces and blen easily into society, we know who we are, so we ain't gotta show who we are.~P
    | Posted on 2005-08-27 00:00:00 | by Aknahlij_d 1 | [ Reply to This ]
      You aint no soldier if you cant feel
    You aint a ryder if time can't heal
    Love in this context, war between minds
    you better check this text, if you think we weak, no rhyme

    i liked these lines the most. what's up with pj? anyway this sh it was tight, and it's cool that u still repping darksyde even though it's founder aint been around in a while. i don't understand ur line about me. explain it 2 me later. holla back cade.
    "troy"
    | Posted on 2005-08-26 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
      kool man..this was wicked tight. Im sad for Troy...and the favorites game. I am glad you put him in your poem...im sure he will appreciate that. Hey...i wanna write about you! ill have to read more [censored] about you tho...i dont wanna say sh!t i dont know about...i took along time to write that poem abotu Raeanna((Just Because)) ne ways great poem! Love it!
    L8r babes! xoxo

    -Suicidalchild51-
    | Posted on 2005-08-26 00:00:00 | by Suicidalchild51 | [ Reply to This ]
      Never go down...and especially without a fight.

    Cade, I think I see what you are saying, and if not, the message of sh*t going down is clear.
    Your words, as always, touch something within me and make me want to rise to the occasion for you...

    Talk to you later
    Lisa
    | Posted on 2005-08-26 00:00:00 | by ravenwolf68 | [ Reply to This ]


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