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    dots Submission Name: Green Eyesdots
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    Author: michelle8586
    ASL Info:    20/F/PA
    Elite Ratio:    2.87 - 37/39/15
    Words: 125
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsGreen Eyesdots
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    Dark green bloodshot eyes filled with such abominate
    With such animosity your hands clasped around my neck
    Didn't mean to make you so furious
    I gasp for air
    I choke
    You don't let go
    Your strength over powers me
    You hold even tighter as I struggle
    The names you called me are unforgettable
    "You whore, you slut, I want you to die bitch!"
    You shouted them so loud
    So close you were
    This monster passing through
    Vanished
    Not knowing what came over you
    Your dark green bloodshot eyes turn back to the color they once were
    You slowly let go of your grip
    Your tears started to flow
    You hold on to me affectionately
    "Please forgive me?"

    Michelle L. Gresko April 1, 2005




    Submitted on 2005-08-26 07:06:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      We always hurt the ones we love. I enjoyed this, it was full of emotion and kept me on the edge of my seat while I was reading it.
    | Posted on 2005-08-26 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]


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