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    dots Submission Name: Transcending Smiledots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Poetry/Happy
    Total Views: 723
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 654



    Description:
       I've been not very focused lately and I just wanted to do something happy and because I want everyone to SMILE ~ SMILES everyone, SMILES!!!

    Love,Peace,Joy!!! tif ; )
    Happy DAYZ!


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsTranscending Smiledots
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    Awake
    2 this Day
    A SMILE ; )

    Tis not fashionable
    but personal
    style

    When you talk
    let your smile
    shine through

    Pretty soon
    others want 2
    do it too!

    Do it passing
    strangers &
    over the phone

    It makes a
    difference
    to those
    feeling alone

    A big ole'
    GRIN ; )
    ear-to-ear

    Make those
    frowns
    disappear

    Can you feel
    me smiling
    now?

    Pass it on ~
    you know
    how..... ; - )




    Submitted on 2005-08-26 13:01:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      That was simply delightful to read. I can't stop smiling. I will make this a fav. You had a great flow. And your imagery was excellent. This has a postive feel to it and it just warms you over. Great job.
    Maggie
    | Posted on 2005-12-08 00:00:00 | by Magnolia Steele | [ Reply to This ]
      I came across this poem today and this was just what I needed for specfic reasons. Makes us stop and think. I love happy thoughts and reading uplifting poems.
    | Posted on 2005-10-10 00:00:00 | by AlabamaFarmGirl | [ Reply to This ]
      oh so great! i love when people smile at you even though you dont know them, it really does make peoples days. so keep smiling!! this made me smile so i better go pass it on now
    -steph
    | Posted on 2005-08-28 00:00:00 | by playcrackthesky | [ Reply to This ]
      You are a very uplifting person my friend.
    I go and read you things when my day has been rather bland and I thank you for the things you post.

    I am smiling and I always will.

    Take care

    ~shawn
    | Posted on 2005-08-26 00:00:00 | by armand | [ Reply to This ]
      this was a great topic and youre format and delivery was excellent.
    i throughly enjoyed reading this.
    not a bad word about.

    youre format of this intrigued me the most=creativity is probably one of youre stronger points=i thinks

    ryme was also good
    and most of all that is not important to me,what it make me feel,and message does

    good job.
    i am not engaged to seek a certain persons writes ususaal but urs is a exception made

    wes all toyysruss
    | Posted on 2005-08-26 00:00:00 | by toyysruss | [ Reply to This ]
      A smile is silent - but speaks volumes ! The idea of smiling over the phone is great and a vastly neglected exercise. As usual - good one.
    | Posted on 2005-08-26 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      pass it on indeed! i've been waking with a smile on my face these days, it sure feels good. always so uplifting you are Tiff... thanks for your beautiful presence, and i can see your smile from here!
    shine on sweet thing.
    love&hugs
    ~Cat
    | Posted on 2005-08-26 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]
      hey hows things just got a chance to sign in thanx for the comments
    this is a good post as usual and afte i ead it i did put that smile on
    i am not sure how long until i decide to write somemore but i still like reading your posts and there are a few others that i enjoy reading from
    the elite posts when i see your post i will alwaz enjoy your view
    thanx again
    sandman
    | Posted on 2005-08-26 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]


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