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    dots Submission Name: Quantum Physicsdots
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    Author: Emma_closes
    ASL Info:    15/f/fl
    Elite Ratio:    4.28 - 88/111/44
    Words: 152
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 219
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1132



    Description:
       I know there's more out there, this is just my admission that I wish I could find it. I chose to relate it to something scientific, both for irony and because it happens to be one thing that escapes me nearly as much as the other does.


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    dotsQuantum Physicsdots
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    I want to set my words on fire
    and use them as a fuel
    that will propel me out
    into my walls,
    something so less dense than liquid.
    I'll smooth through molecules
    defying atomic structure,
    melting into dimensions
    you can only imagine.
    Until finally I've found my home
    in some mental state
    you usually find institutionalized.

    I'll live there in that ocean
    of atoms not even science can define,
    becoming the nucleus
    of a particle in your eye.
    You'll carry me with you
    as a rebellion to the natural laws.
    And in these actions
    we'll collapse the universe
    while glazed eyes around us
    notice nothing.
    But we saved them,
    at last.

    I'll spin electrons into chords
    until your body is singing
    with a rhythm undefined.
    You'll carry that music with you
    while we unwind the world,
    and I'll be just that vital
    subatomic particle
    that reconfigured
    the whole damn balance.




    Submitted on 2005-08-27 16:51:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      all i can do is laugh and smile at the amazing-ness of this poem. i share your void of scientific crap, and it was well-played in your lines. you have some great verbs and adjectives...quite lovely. i especially enjoyed the "rebellion" to the natural laws that you become...i've always wanted to rebel against nature just to see what it's like. there are some neat tricks out there that seem to defy nature, but they don't really defy it just because itdoesn't seem natural to my untrained eye...hmmm this is turning into a ramble so i'll say again i liked this and it was amazing to me.
    | Posted on 2005-08-27 00:00:00 | by osweetrepose | [ Reply to This ]



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