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    dots Submission Name: Existencedots

    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 120
    Class/Type: Prose/Misc
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    As the animal has the ability to rid itself of limb, when seemingly dead in a trap; as goes existence. We ourselves a resource of survival, keepers of our extinction. Creation an efficient creature, for life goes on.
    Love truly conquers all when it is a race not run alone but conquered in encouragement more than mere necessity.
    For from the same mouth which preaches encouragement, holds the teeth that can tear at and cut to release, if ego of self holds progress for all. Extinction a necessary, saving evil.
    But, all can be secured in the Glory that is One and extinction then only veiled safety securely in back but a follower none the same.

    Submitted on 2004-04-15 15:24:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      an abstract read, or so one may think. An interesting piece as all have been thus far. I like how it's quaint, yet controversial, and done seemingly effertlessly. Nothing more than a quick jot of deep personal thoughts, intertwined to make a delicate opinionated insight.
    | Posted on 2006-03-20 00:00:00 | by dismentled | [ Reply to This ]
      i don't necessarily agree with the conclusion, but i like the piece nonetheless, and it is an interesting topic for writing..i like the idea that extinction is necessary....and that beauty and terror coexist in every being
    "For from the same mouth which preaches encouragement, holds the teeth that can tear at and cut to release,"
    this i believe will take a few more reads to fully digest, but it has the compelling nature to bring me back for those additional reads....

    "your teeth believe that teeth are for tearing" Jeff Mangum

    have a good one
    | Posted on 2004-04-15 00:00:00 | by FallenGrace | [ Reply to This ]

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