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    dots Submission Name: Sick And Tireddots
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    Author: Mrs Peabody
    ASL Info:    17/F/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    3.58 - 25/37/8
    Words: 151
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 780
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       Something I put together in about five minutes. Stupid, but my feelings exactly.


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    dotsSick And Tireddots
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    I'm getting sick and tired of the same old things
    Of love gone wrong and summer flings
    I'm getting sick and tired of those tired old rants
    "He likes my best friend" or "We have the same pants!"
    I'm getting sick and tired of every 14 yr. old chick
    They'd bleed themselves dry for the guys they call "dicks"
    I'm getting sick and tired of power and wealth
    Of which we care more about than happiness and health
    I'm getting sick and tired of cute kittens and dogs
    I'd rather have a beetle or a monkey or a pen full of hogs
    I'm getting sick and tired of the many teachers pets
    They'd eat their own shit for an A+, I bet
    I'm getting sick and tired of writing these words
    Life would be easier if I simply could not be heard


    Perhaps then I wouldn't complain as much...




    Submitted on 2005-08-27 20:12:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This made me laugh. I can imagine it as a highschool student in an immature sophisticated anarchy rant or more down to earth and humourous, while satirical and serious, for a college student complaining about students and proffessors... yeah. Peace. -rue
    | Posted on 2005-09-03 00:00:00 | by Rue | [ Reply to This ]
      lol i realli like it, you expressed your views in a very "teenager" way...lol hahahaha PMS-ing lately perhapes? keep up the gud work lol ~agz
    | Posted on 2005-08-27 00:00:00 | by irish_fairy1018 | [ Reply to This ]
      lol i realli like it, you expressed your veiws in a very "teenager" way...lol hahahaha PMS-ing lately perhapes? keep up the gud work lol ~agz
    | Posted on 2005-08-27 00:00:00 | by irish_fairy1018 | [ Reply to This ]


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