unoriginal poem

Author: musclebound350 ASL Info:    26/male Elite Ratio:    4.87 - 197 /202 /70 Words: 106

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unoriginal poem

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You try to write something original But how exactly can you do that what way can I tell something that exemplifies that original are the words you speak the ideas you come to find you write about your feelings what pops into your mind each mind is unique our thoughts are not the same we each express differently life is all just a game tired of the un-originality that people mark on our words everyone is original to say not is so absurd critique this as you wish good or bad but this is original my words are all I have.

Submitted on 2005-08-28 01:38:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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Yes indeed! I couldn't agree more than I do! This is a great poem! Speaks volumes very loud and clear! I always wonder how people can leave comments saying you should have written it this way or that way and pick the poem apart. It leaves you wanting to tell them, 'ya know if I were you I would have written it the way you would have written it'! HA! This is good stuff and I love the fact that you wrote a poem about it! Great great great! Did I say great??! Take care! Lorna

| Posted on 2005-09-09 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ]

hey! you are unique ... and this is most definitely original! ...and this writing can be a good form of catharsis so keep it going! J

| Posted on 2005-09-05 00:00:00 | by Alter idem | [ Reply to This ]

Hey James, This is the most original work i've read for the day...lol I so totally agree with you. a lot of people say how unoriginal the things we write are our thoughts and our words expressed through a paper. The ideas may be commone but it's the way we write it and how we write something whether it be from a new perspective or old. I do say sometimes, that the piece does sound common but i never say it's unoriginal. Good write...loved it. Take care...Peace...Irina

| Posted on 2005-08-28 00:00:00 | by charmedidentity | [ Reply to This ]

This is the best I have read from you. it isn't drawn out or represented with a tear next to it, this is a real poem. And a pretty clever one at that. The title drew me in and then yes it is what it was-very original and it flowed well.One sugestion and take it or leave it but in your last stanza: critique this as you may original or not these words come from my mouth what I say cannot be taught [I know you were rhyming with not but--....it just isn't that good--it also doesn't make too much sense because sure it can be taught..anything can if it is understood..ya know? anyway that;s all/real solid/I like the new style-stick with it and I will be reading more. LT

| Posted on 2005-08-28 00:00:00 | by LameMansTerms | [ Reply to This ]

wow i think this is the most unique poem yet. its like writing about writing. jejeje sounds silly but i think its great that u can express the way that u feel about what others comment in this form. hope that people can understand and appreciate ur talent. laters guy.

| Posted on 2005-08-28 00:00:00 | by ibelikeso | [ Reply to This ]

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