Description: Just odd how some say that your work is "unoriginal" I guess to me this is how I feel about it. I guess me explaining original and unoriginal. hope you like it. If not, well cant please everyone. Thanks to LameMansTerms for the help on the last stanza. Sounds a lot better now.
Yes indeed! I couldn't agree more than I do! This is a great poem! Speaks volumes very loud and clear! I always wonder how people can leave comments saying you should have written it this way or that way and pick the poem apart. It leaves you wanting to tell them, 'ya know if I were you I would have written it the way you would have written it'! HA! This is good stuff and I love the fact that you wrote a poem about it! Great great great! Did I say great??! Take care!
Hey James, This is the most original work i've read for the day...lol I so totally agree with you. a lot of people say how unoriginal the things we write are our thoughts and our words expressed through a paper. The ideas may be commone but it's the way we write it and how we write something whether it be from a new perspective or old.
I do say sometimes, that the piece does sound common but i never say it's unoriginal.
This is the best I have read from you. it isn't drawn out or represented with a tear next to it, this is a real poem. And a pretty clever one at that. The title drew me in and then yes it is what it was-very original and it flowed well.One sugestion and take it or leave it but in your last stanza: critique this as you may original or not these words come from my mouth what I say cannot be taught [I know you were rhyming with not but--....it just isn't that good--it also doesn't make too much sense because sure it can be taught..anything can if it is understood..ya know? anyway that;s all/real solid/I like the new style-stick with it and I will be reading more. LT
wow i think this is the most unique poem yet. its like writing about writing. jejeje sounds silly but i think its great that u can express the way that u feel about what others comment in this form. hope that people can understand and appreciate ur talent. laters guy.
Submission Name: unoriginal poem
Take care!