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    dots Submission Name: Not Scared To Say I Love Udots
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    Author: heavy knowledge
    ASL Info:    15/m/slidell, L.a.(N.O.)
    Elite Ratio:    2.72 - 106/156/34
    Words: 298
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 788
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsNot Scared To Say I Love Udots
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    I want to be the one to make u laugh the one to see u cry
    I want you to be the one i run to when a family member dies
    I want to be like bow wow and around u wrap my arms
    I want u to wear my white tee when u get wet from the storm

    Will u be there forever untill the end
    Will u laugh at my jokes and make a grin
    Will u make our first time magic when i am within
    Will u be the one to say i love u over and over again

    I am not afraid to hold ur hand infornt of my boys
    I am not afraid to tell u my inner pain or joy
    I not afraid to be me around u
    I not afraid to drink Sprite while u drink Mountain Dew

    See i made u laugh wasnt that funny
    See i bought ur meal dont worry i got money
    See i can watch u get dressed aint u beautiful
    See i can make u cry and in the end still get next to u

    I will call u daddy's little girl cause ur mine
    I will call u every night just to speak my mind
    I will call u to see if u are okay after a long day
    I will call u to go to church because god brought us together so we must pray

    I love u and that all u nedd to know
    I love u and u love me for me not for the house or the doe
    I love u and im not scared to say it
    I love u and like 50 cent damn baby all i need is a lil bit




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      I really like this. & I totally feel your sincerity. What kind of girl can resist a guy who writes poetry? haha. Im very impressed. Keep up the good work!

    *randa*
    | Posted on 2006-08-18 00:00:00 | by Randa04 | [ Reply to This ]
      That was beatiful. I wish every guy or girl i dated was like you. Any girl would be lucky to have you. Sometimes the poem was just a little off but i love it. Wish someone wrote me a poem like that *sniffle*

    much love hope and whatever,
    Danni
    | Posted on 2005-10-02 00:00:00 | by Poeticprincess | [ Reply to This ]
      i like this one. but i think u've done much better. sometimes the flow was definitely off. and some of the sh it u said was so random. it was pretty good 4 ur first write like this though.
    | Posted on 2005-08-29 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
      DAMN! dat is gewd as...did u write this man...coz it's realli gewd u dont find alot of ppl with feelings like this who aren't afraid to show them..i am luvin this poem...
    [--iZa--]
    | Posted on 2005-08-29 00:00:00 | by disturbed_angel | [ Reply to This ]


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