Confused and still seeking a purpose.
The mind is winding down as the incense burns on.
Nirvana is still playing that sad song.
Sipping my coffee and enjoying this lost consciousness.
Life canít be too much better then this.
I like this one To me it reflects the time one needs to themselves I like you use music to relax The smell of the incense is a very powerful relaxer I use it a lot to a Very good write with a good message Take some time out of the day for yourself and relax Take Care Ron
And Thank You for your recent comments I very much appreciate it
nice Felicia sounds like a restful peaceful moment one away from the battle of life sort of a coffee break in the middle chaos. we need those times to unwind and gather our thoughts regroup if you will. what better what than sipping coffee and listening to nirvana, lovely, mike
A moment huh, kind of makes more sense when you point that out. You know what this reminds me of? The guy on the Maxell tapes, you know where he's sitting in the arm chair and the music from the stero system is slowly blowing him away. Well just to let you know, I really enjoyed every word of this poem, and I'd give it a 9.2 out of 10. Keep the poems comming.
lol well the name of the poem attracted me and usually i dont like short poems because people can't pull them off but i was glad to see that you're one of the skilled few that can. i particularly loved the use of incence in this piece...it pulled me in and made me feel the moment because i've been in it and know exactly how it feels. very good job.