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    dots Submission Name: untitleddots

    Author: maninthemirror
    ASL Info:    17/m/arkansas
    Elite Ratio:    2.64 - 224/318/109
    Words: 170
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
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       this is my lyrical fuck you to people that don't like me "bitch now you dead"

    so I don't have to deal with you no more

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    the way that I act, that shit reflect on my life
    anybody fuck with me, they gonna deal with some strife
    lay'em down and getting ready for that eternal sleep
    you know, that type of shit that make your family weep

    even if I'm broke, I still got the green goblin
    but I'm never broke because the hood I'm robin
    bitch now you dead, and your family be sobbin
    and your wife to be is now slobbin on my nobbin

    I don't know what you think about me
    but whatever it is, it seem to make you angry
    is it that I fucked yyour bitch, or that I stole your weed
    but you know for me, it's all good indeed

    you don't like me thats cool, I blow a blunt in your face
    you say I'm white so I can't rap, it don't matter, the race
    as long as you say what you know is true
    shit talkin is kool cause its some shit I do

    Submitted on 2005-08-28 23:04:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      haha! yess! you so rock!this is kick a$s!man it makes me wanna kick a$s!**kicks J**lol! wow! this was awesum!loves it babes!another fav!ur awesum!keep um kumin!

    | Posted on 2005-08-28 00:00:00 | by Suicidalchild51 | [ Reply to This ]

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