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    dots Submission Name: Is there a point in living?dots
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    Author: unforgiving05
    ASL Info:    19/m/tn
    Elite Ratio:    3.94 - 45/49/14
    Words: 120
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsIs there a point in living?dots
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    There cannot be a point in living
    When we know what the ending brings.
    Our broken hearts need to much mending
    They're torn and shredded into strings.

    There cannot be a point in dreaming
    It only brings to us despair.
    We try to forget that inside we're screaming
    But in our minds it's only air.

    We try our best to get what we want
    Knowing that we will never receive
    Yet still we dream and try to flaunt
    But these dreams we can't believe.

    For if these dreams we believe are true
    And with our lives move on ahead.
    We will not stop until we're through
    The gates of which the angels tred.




    Submitted on 2005-08-29 07:39:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I can relate with this piece, you have the same ideas as I...we all ponder that question, what then after death? Then again life is still too convoluted to understand.
    Till the dragons are saved...till later times.
    | Posted on 2005-08-29 00:00:00 | by SavedDragon | [ Reply to This ]
      Really good write. All I will say to you is that yes - life can get you down, but in the REAL scheme of things life is all we have and it is for living. There are only two certainties in life.
    1. We enter this world enter it with nothing.
    2. We leave it with nothing.
    What happens in-between is up for grabs. Keep your chin up.
    | Posted on 2005-08-29 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      this is really good! i dont think theres a point of living and im not gonna be all clinche and cheesy and be like life will get better cuz its bull and its not! i can feel ur emotion! good job!
    ~akaila evonne~
    | Posted on 2005-08-29 00:00:00 | by iluvpoetry_1 | [ Reply to This ]



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