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    dots Submission Name: Seasonaldots

    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 30
    Class/Type: Prose/Misc
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    Glossy Red Crab Apples
    suspended branch
    parachute animation
    waiting for fall
    in literal
    The fates of hungry bird beaks
    of rotting to core...

    Submitted on 2004-04-15 16:59:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      "fallen yet saved" only to be "fallen" once again, one might think. however that's just one interpretation of this simplistic prose, not that I'm complaining. Anyhow, fair read. However, I'm thought strucken by the idea that it could be more, but maybe i'm reading something that isn't there.
    | Posted on 2006-03-25 00:00:00 | by dismentled | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow, this is really interesting. I like that it's a bit of an enigma, but I'll figure out my own meaning. I love the images.
    | Posted on 2004-04-15 00:00:00 | by cuddledumplin | [ Reply to This ]
      hmm short, powerful, speaks a lot and sort of confusing lol. I like how it starts all nice (by the wat for some reason 'glossy red CRAB apples'.. cracked me up lol.) and then it turns dark. Wonderful prose. Keep it up.
    | Posted on 2004-04-15 00:00:00 | by Exodus Night Sky | [ Reply to This ]

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