"fallen yet saved" only to be "fallen" once again, one might think. however that's just one interpretation of this simplistic prose, not that I'm complaining. Anyhow, fair read. However, I'm thought strucken by the idea that it could be more, but maybe i'm reading something that isn't there.
hmm short, powerful, speaks a lot and sort of confusing lol. I like how it starts all nice (by the wat for some reason 'glossy red CRAB apples'.. cracked me up lol.) and then it turns dark. Wonderful prose. Keep it up.