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    dots Submission Name: Kill medots
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    Author: Geraldine
    ASL Info:    25
    Elite Ratio:    3.2 - 241/296/80
    Words: 179
    Class/Type: Misc/Angry
    Total Views: 972
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    Bytes: 608



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    dotsKill medots
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    Push me
    pull me
    Hit me
    hug me
    Bite me
    kiss me
    Hate me
    love me
    Throw me
    hold me
    Kill me
    save me
    Hurt me
    mend me
    Spit me
    crave me
    Help me
    kick me
    Scratch me
    feel me
    Rape me
    take me
    Sell me
    steal me
    Leave me
    bleed me
    Break me
    smash me
    Rip me
    cut me
    Teer me
    crash me





    Submitted on 2005-08-29 12:06:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I keep coming back to this one ...hehe :)
    | Posted on 2005-08-29 00:00:00 | by Sophia | [ Reply to This ]
      hehehe...Oh my God...love the way you write...i dont know whether to be amused or whether to drown in the intensity of this poem .
    | Posted on 2005-08-29 00:00:00 | by Sophia | [ Reply to This ]
      this was good but i think you need at some thing at the end to rap up the piece onther then that it was good i don't know what else to say hope to hear fromyou and keep up the good work
    | Posted on 2005-08-29 00:00:00 | by theman | [ Reply to This ]
      Me me me me me ! I take it this was about you. I thought it was superb. It was raw, simple and highly effective in my mind. Be careful what you wish for though ! Superb write - well done.
    | Posted on 2005-08-29 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]


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