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    dots Submission Name: Prayer of the Daydots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 81
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       Selah, Love,Peace,Joy!!!!

    Smiles and Love for the week Elitists!

    tif ; )


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    dotsPrayer of the Daydots
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    Of Love is my prayer
    of the day

    through breath
    of Divine
    "IT" knows
    the way ~

    to each despairing heart
    "IT" knows
    what to say

    let our teardrops
    form a river
    to carry us to see

    awash in Grace
    all sins have
    been set free

    in thankful reverance
    let us
    Be

    feel this prayer
    and let "IT"
    take your strife

    take this day
    and make "IT"
    all your Life




    Submitted on 2005-08-29 12:26:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      What a wonderful message you have here Tiff.
    The reason I do read your thing is because of you inspiration...the way you have the tendency to make me look at myself and say (WTF) For this I thank you...

    ~shawn
    | Posted on 2005-08-29 00:00:00 | by armand | [ Reply to This ]
      What a wonderful message you have here Tiff.
    The reason I do read your thing is because of you inspiration...the way you have the tendency to make me look at myself and say (WTF) For this I thank you...

    ~shawn
    | Posted on 2005-08-29 00:00:00 | by armand | [ Reply to This ]
      Hi Tiff!..another one of your joy inspiring poems .:)
    I liked the note of optimism and faith in this one .It wasnt about nature this time though , but it touched my heart anyhow...:)


    Trish
    | Posted on 2005-08-29 00:00:00 | by Sophia | [ Reply to This ]
      another beautiful poem i see you have been busy
    i am glad you liked into my soul
    this is my 9th book when i am on i will post appoxamately 700 to 1000 words or 5 pages of poetry over the next couple months i cant publish for legal reasons and divorce but atleast some people can enjoy this writing gift that found me late in life
    thanx for your kind words and moving poems to read
    take care and hope alls good
    sandman
    | Posted on 2005-08-29 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
      Much inspired with a clear message to us all to keep smiling, to keep positive and keep living our lives to the fullest possible.
    | Posted on 2005-08-29 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      once again, you grace us with such healing and beauty.. the tears that wash us into Grace. what a glorious image. i can always count on your for such wonder and glorious healing every day. you are a jewel, you are. i could wake to this prayer every day, thank you!

    peace&blessings
    ~Cat
    | Posted on 2005-08-29 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]


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