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    dots Submission Name: I got 5 on itdots
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    Author: maninthemirror
    ASL Info:    17/m/arkansas
    Elite Ratio:    2.64 - 224/318/109
    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 500
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       this is the re-re-re-re make of I got 5 on it....sorta


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    dotsI got 5 on itdots
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    I got 5 on what you need
    if what you need is some weed
    we can smoke a blunt or 17
    you know what I mean
    Don't rush me, while I'm smoking YOUR weed
    open a window or something, man it's getting hard to breathe
    smoke out of a bong, I got two joints up my sleeve

    and stems, well sometimes you just gotta smoke'em
    mix it with the bud and roll'em up, and toke'em

    I got 5 on a quarter sack,
    Gimme somthing extra , and I got 10 on what I lack




    Submitted on 2005-08-29 17:09:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Damn people really frontin on the comments on was one! I guess I feel the vibe more caues I get blazed myself, I'm feeling alot of your sh*t you see I'm stalking you:) LoVeIt!

    P.s "don't rush me, while I'm smoking YOUR weed." Priceless!
    | Posted on 2005-09-08 00:00:00 | by SingleRose | [ Reply to This ]
      hehe! u just love your weed huh! lol! gotta love it! ur poems are so awesum man...they mke me wanna smoke weed too...**takes a drag** i like this one!ima add it!

    -Suicidalchild51-
    | Posted on 2005-08-29 00:00:00 | by Suicidalchild51 | [ Reply to This ]


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