I No Longer Care by thor

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Submission Name: I No Longer Care dots

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Author:	thor_s avatar
ASL Info:	18/M/Ar
Elite Ratio:	3.58 - 237/233/70
Words:	94

Class/Type:	Poetry/Angry
Total Views:	889
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	577

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I think it speaks for it'sself, but it is about somone i know. it was a long time ago though.

I No Longer Care dots

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Your life is falling apart
and I realised I don't care
my emotions all burned out
so screw you, and farewell

cynicism and apathy
replace caring empathy
I tried to wave red flags
now my arms are all worn out

In time I hope you come to see
the mistakes that you have made
and I hope you get your just reward
for ignoring what I've said

now I laugh instead of cry
as you dig your own grave
why should I even care at all
for you I cannot save

Submitted on 2005-08-29 19:28:54 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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this is how i feel towards my frend .. i told him many times to stop cutting himself but everytime he did it he would come to me n i would tell him i couldnt put up with ne more.. cuz he not onli hurthim self he hurt me too
| Posted on 2005-08-29 00:00:00 | by scardnscared | [ Reply to This ]
this reminds me so much of how i felt when my friend didnt listen to me about doing something STUPID and then she got in trouble and expected me to feel bad for her.. I love the metaphors.
| Posted on 2005-08-29 00:00:00 | by namesdontmatter | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
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