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    dots Submission Name: I No Longer Caredots
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    Author: thor_s avatar
    ASL Info:    18/M/Ar
    Elite Ratio:    3.58 - 237/233/70
    Words: 94
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
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       I think it speaks for it'sself, but it is about somone i know. it was a long time ago though.


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    dotsI No Longer Caredots
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    Your life is falling apart
    and I realised I don't care
    my emotions all burned out
    so screw you, and farewell

    cynicism and apathy
    replace caring empathy
    I tried to wave red flags
    now my arms are all worn out

    In time I hope you come to see
    the mistakes that you have made
    and I hope you get your just reward
    for ignoring what I've said

    now I laugh instead of cry
    as you dig your own grave
    why should I even care at all
    for you I cannot save




    Submitted on 2005-08-29 19:28:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this is how i feel towards my frend .. i told him many times to stop cutting himself but everytime he did it he would come to me n i would tell him i couldnt put up with ne more.. cuz he not onli hurthim self he hurt me too
    | Posted on 2005-08-29 00:00:00 | by scardnscared | [ Reply to This ]
      this reminds me so much of how i felt when my friend didnt listen to me about doing something STUPID and then she got in trouble and expected me to feel bad for her.. I love the metaphors.
    | Posted on 2005-08-29 00:00:00 | by namesdontmatter | [ Reply to This ]


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