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    dots Submission Name: Get a Lifedots
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    Author: EEKS
    Elite Ratio:    2.7 - 647/1206/773
    Words: 95
    Class/Type: Poetry/Me
    Total Views: 987
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 640



    Description:
       Just a rant with a few poetic phrases. Not looking for approval just looking for thoughts..


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    dotsGet a Lifedots
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    Curious faces, strange expectations
    Will I get up
    Or sit
    with this angry look that to most
    Is all too familiar

    Look away, Leave me alone
    Forget about my business
    Mind your own
    Your lack of lige
    Is no excuse to bother me
    Even though in comparison
    I must be absolutely fascinating

    I am not some specimen
    To observe, and examine
    And then explain to others
    As though you somehow understand
    You don't know
    My reasons
    For being the way I am
    So step back, step off
    Get a life, get lost




    Submitted on 2005-08-29 19:36:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I like this....wierd but i could see you getting up from bed yawning with the eyeliner smooshed and you're pissed...
    don't ask y...but i liked this one, i liked all the snappy quick sayings. they were just like BAM BITCH!!! uh take that with your unhappy meal...
    | Posted on 2006-07-05 00:00:00 | by ollie_wicked | [ Reply to This ]
      I love the message this sends. The flow was a bit strange but other than that it was good. You didnt capitalize with and that looks weird.. Im sure it was just a typo.
    | Posted on 2005-08-30 00:00:00 | by jaggedwords | [ Reply to This ]


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