Description: Just a rant with a few poetic phrases. Not looking for approval just looking for thoughts..
Get a Life -------------------------------------------
Curious faces, strange expectations
Will I get up
Or sit
with this angry look that to most
Is all too familiar
Look away, Leave me alone
Forget about my business
Mind your own
Your lack of lige
Is no excuse to bother me
Even though in comparison
I must be absolutely fascinating
I am not some specimen
To observe, and examine
And then explain to others
As though you somehow understand
You don't know
My reasons
For being the way I am
So step back, step off
Get a life, get lost
I like this....wierd but i could see you getting up from bed yawning with the eyeliner smooshed and you're pissed... don't ask y...but i liked this one, i liked all the snappy quick sayings. they were just like BAM BITCH!!! uh take that with your unhappy meal...
I love the message this sends. The flow was a bit strange but other than that it was good. You didnt capitalize with and that looks weird.. Im sure it was just a typo.
Submission Name: Get a Life
