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    dots Submission Name: Bewitcheddots
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    Author: bgj
    Elite Ratio:    2.63 - 65/63/27
    Words: 330
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       Peace and Love to all


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    dotsBewitcheddots
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    Little sorceress with enchanted eyes
    Which burn into my soul,
    You drew me in with chastise sighs,
    Sweet vows of passion untold.

    Playful succubus who haunts my dreams
    And stirs my spirit to flame,
    Within these sheets of damp desire
    Our fervor knows no shame.

    Your charms of magic and potions of love
    Hot arrows that pierce my heart,
    They fill my mind with flaming desires
    Which tear my soul apart.

    Little witch of voodoo love,
    My heart you have enslaved,
    And placed upon my soul a mark
    Iíll carry to my grave.

    Bobby G. Jarrard

    © 2005 by Bobby G. Jarrard















    Submitted on 2005-08-30 09:05:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Awesome...I love the stanza including the succubus. This is intellectual and I love your word choice. I think there are a few grammatical things you could work on...Sentance structure, ect. Thanks for sharing.

    Twila
    | Posted on 2005-08-30 00:00:00 | by Twila | [ Reply to This ]


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