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    dots Submission Name: Sunset Bring Moonshadowdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 74
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 535
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 619



    Description:
       I was watching the sunset and sipping some wine...

    Love,Peace,Joy!!!
    tif ; )


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    dotsSunset Bring Moonshadowdots
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    If I was only to capture
    a scene; as "IT" was..

    Could <@> express
    "IT"
    mind, matter, thought,
    pen?

    Would I fondly
    remember..
    tHE light
    revealing, inviting
    dark shadows?

    would my mind
    be as slowly
    exaggerated
    as the blue sky
    melts to
    pool of red?

    What tastes better
    Divine..
    the mood, the setting,
    the wine?

    All Divine
    in respect and
    thankfullness
    "IT" All





    Submitted on 2005-08-30 11:49:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I agree that there is a lot of meaning here. I got confused with the "<@>" thingy...but I liked it. Very good. It landscaped a nice picture for me...
    "Victory is mine!"
    | Posted on 2005-08-30 00:00:00 | by AngryAtTheWorld | [ Reply to This ]
      Much meaning here and well written. Wine and sunset will always go hand in hand especially when both are tinged with red !
    | Posted on 2005-08-30 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      very nice in deed
    havent been away working this week so a little time on site this was a beautiful picture once again
    very deep meaning in all the right ways
    sandman
    | Posted on 2005-08-30 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]


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