Damn must be the word of the day
Because damn dog why u had to pass away
Damn why am i stuck with ur gurl crying
She holds on like glue because ur dying
The bullet went in ur rib through ur left lung
Just rembering of past days when we hung
Damn is the only word that i can say
Wondering whether u will live or die like a pengulum thast sways
Damnwhy wasnt i there u hold u down
Damn if i was there ur body would have never hit the ground
So should i blame myself for wut happen
Where was ur heat so u could do the clappin
All i see is ur blood on my white tee
Wondering in heaven will u rember me
Damn that shit aint fair wish it would have been another
And damn i have to go explain this to ur worried mother
Damn because all u are now is a memory
But when u get to heaven please rember me
Well.....I know the pain. YES I DO! All I can say is that....no matter what one does....that doesn't change many outcomes. You can't point the finger at yourself. If you were meant to be there....you would have been.
As long as you keep this person in your heart....they will forever live on......MEMORIES is what makes a person's soul stay on earth. That is what keeps them circulating!
I know the terminology here.....DAM....DAM...DAM...DAM.....
Keep your head up high and know that he is looking down on you saying....Damn....I wish I could tell him I'm okay.
Pour one out....let it soak in the ground....yet know in your heart.....is where the friendship is found.
even though i am older i undestand this poemand i do like the way you pesented it my two sons play in the new game of this story my opinion such a waste of life we used to just beat the [censored] out of each othe now the teenages kill each other pretty f...ed i say great write no bad intent given to you sandman
wot u have written is good, u need to sort out ur typos, i used to write the way u do, but readers kept tellin me off cos they didnt understand wot i was saying lol, anyway nice write keep em coming x x x x
ur typing sux azz. i liked the emotion in this one though. it kinda reminded me of tupac's life goes on. that doesn't mean i'm comparing u 2 pac so don't get cocky. u use a lotta slang. but then again street poetry has it own kinda flava. i like the way u said darnn throughout the whole write. good job chaz.