Hi Dan. first of all sorry for not commenting on your poems for so long. Now to the poem, it is lovely and cute. Unfortunately I think I have never been to the storybook road. Your piece is good as usual. With love sanam
Great job on this poem and I have been read'n a few of 'em. I missed out on the fun but I might give it a try yet. I always ewnjoy read'n your work and find this one amusing and bright. Keep it up! !Doc`
very nice addition to Storybook Road. seems we all have a different slant to it and that's really cool. i liked the reference to the "golden brew." it makes me think of the butterbeer they drink in Harry Potter. glad you joined the challenge!
A wonderful trip down memory lane. I think this title has brought out the Peter Pan in all of us. Such dreamers we are. I absolutely love cobblestone streets. Great job here, Dan. You have given your inner child the space he needed. Read mine for a different slant, if you have time. Carol
oh, this is splendid! and no one minds if you join the fun. I will take the liberty of speaking for everyone that we're glad you did! I love this poem too. sort of expounds on mine. very, very nice. I think I'll make it a favorite!
Wonderful contribution - glad you decided to join in...I really liked the drive I took with this one. I felt as if I was on the road of many of my childhood faves... Very nice writing...I feel so giddy at the moment Lisa
This was kinda cute and the whole way through, I was thinking of The Shire in The Lord of the Rings! I love that movie and this write was very good. It was short and very sweet and I really thought that the ending was a great way to close this piece! Nice job! Candi