Out of all your lyrics that I've read, I have to say I think this was the best written and thought out one yet! I mean this is what a song really is right here. Its emotions and thoughts (basically poetry) that are easy to sing to and follow. I'd have to say that this is something that would be a rock or pop song cause most of your lyrics are like that and they go so well in this one. But anyways I gotta go to school here soon so I hope that you're good and I'll talk to you later.
this is good, multiple meanings here. I can relate to this, though I've never abused any substances, (well save one occasion) and honestly I think you are right about the feelings you get...but, I'll say it again, quit using stuff! 5 Star work
This was a very sad, powerful and emotional piece. Abandoned and betrayed and feeling so hurt and lost that you feel like dying!
The loss is hard to deal with especially if life is already difficult and the friend was a support and you guys pulled each other through. Alot of your sad and depressed feelings may be anger that your not feeling. you need to let the anger through rather than feeling defeated and giving up!!
Very sad - yet positive for seeing / writing about things as they are. Everyone gets down, but the trick is to plough on ahead and see things through and that is exactly what you are doing here by sharing your thoughts / life with others - well done a really good write.
Very emotional. I really liked this though t made me really sad. I hope you're really not doing some of that stuff. Things may seem bad but they'll get better. Anyway good write, great job. Sarah P.S. If you ever need someone to talk to I'm here and I'll help if I can.