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    dots Submission Name: Blue Heron Glidesdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 47
    Class/Type: Prose/Nature
    Total Views: 589
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    Bytes: 375



    Description:
       Just watching a majestic Blue Heron fly across a pond - close up their wingspan is so great and they look almost prehistoric. Just awesome!

    Love,Peace,Joy!!! tif ; )


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    dotsBlue Heron Glidesdots
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    Blue Heron glides
    across still waters
    of afternoon ~*~

    Oh, wingspan
    so wide
    like shadow
    of clouds
    over valley

    Blue Heron lands
    sky, terra,
    water, trees
    As your legs
    are long
    so is your
    lineage

    Blue Heron Is
    Grace in flight
    Sublime




    Submitted on 2005-08-30 17:52:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i can imagine this must have been an incredible sight.. the wingspan is amazing. grace in flight indeed. i just love your short nature poems, all wrapped in beauty like a gift from the sky.

    stay golden,
    ~Cat
    | Posted on 2005-08-31 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]
      Nothing better to see than a graceful bird in flight. You captured the elegance and grace of a beautiful bird so very well.
    | Posted on 2005-08-30 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]


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