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    dots Submission Name: sexy puerto ricandots
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    Author: lil_gh0st_girl
    ASL Info:    16-F-NV
    Elite Ratio:    2.59 - 32/38/21
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Poetry/What you did
    Total Views: 149
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    Bytes: 601



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    Why did you do it, why to me
    do you really believe i should have been hurt
    wit so much glee
    most people would disagree
    i didnt deserve so much pain
    i hurt so much
    my heart can barely maintain
    i cant breathe, i cant see
    without you guiding me
    every step of the way
    you were there even being far away
    i rip apart thinking back
    to what she told me
    i thought was jack
    was it true or was it lie
    my first thought was to die
    i didnt want to hurt again
    bcuz of the guy
    i knew within




    Submitted on 2005-08-30 18:44:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This poem confuses me to some degree. I like it though beacuse it lets me see what she is seeing through my own eyes though. Hope everything goes good and hope that great things will come.
    | Posted on 2005-09-02 00:00:00 | by josymanthegreat | [ Reply to This ]



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