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    dots Submission Name: gh0stdots
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    Author: lil_gh0st_girl
    ASL Info:    16-F-NV
    Elite Ratio:    2.59 - 32/38/21
    Words: 119
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 221
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 600



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    dotsgh0stdots
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    i think i have found the one for me
    oh yes i think that it is to be
    he doesnt know i luv him this much
    i think he just has that one perfect touch
    my muscles quake and my body shakes
    even when my heart he takes
    there is also another one,
    some dont have to guess
    it hink my feelings are all in a mess
    the one i want to be with the most,
    is also known as gh0st
    he is the one for me
    i do believe
    to him i say this
    " if you could pick one to call baby, would you say me, maybe just maybe?"




    Submitted on 2005-08-30 19:08:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i think it was a good poem i liked the begining and the structure was good... im unclear though on why not name him but gh0st
    | Posted on 2005-08-30 00:00:00 | by josymanthegreat | [ Reply to This ]



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