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    dots Submission Name: Abuseddots
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    Author: Poetic Cure
    ASL Info:    49.f.mn
    Elite Ratio:    2.97 - 313/137/33
    Words: 155
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 331
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    Bytes: 1150



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    dotsAbuseddots
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    Hiding in this dark corner.
    Tears falling like rain.
    Thinking of what just
    happen to my heart.

    “Liar” she loudly declared.
    Raising her hand wildly,
    burning her imprint
    into my face.

    Mom doesn’t believe me.
    Pushed away from loving arms.
    My mind in total grief,
    wanting to die right there.

    Guilt of what happened,
    scarred into my heart.
    Branded into my young soul.

    Painful memories,
    of my cousins touch.
    Yearning hands groping,
    burning as it moves,
    along my body.

    Feeling helpless,
    as I laid there,
    unable to move.
    Praying for God to
    help me.

    Abuse is done.
    Bored of me now.
    Feelings of dirtiness,
    overwhelming my soul.

    Thinking back,
    as I sit in this corner.
    Darkness hiding me,
    from the evil ones,
    above me.

    Alone and scared.
    No comfort to find me.
    Hurt and confused.
    No one cares
    for the small child,
    of five.




    Submitted on 2005-08-30 20:16:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      interesting format. fairly different that the"normal" poem. yet deeply gives good visualization and a much sense of feeling from the writers perspective, in the mind-set whence it was written.
    | Posted on 2005-09-29 00:00:00 | by dismentled | [ Reply to This ]
      This piece was powerful, and nicely written. I couldn't imagine feeling that kind of pain...it makes my stomach turn and my skin crawl, it is such a sad sad thing, so horrible for someone, especially a child, to have to indure. I have two children and I know I would literally murder ANYONE who tried to touch them inappropriately. Well, this was a great poem, thanks for sharing it with us, sweety!
    Alissa
    | Posted on 2005-08-31 00:00:00 | by Geraldine | [ Reply to This ]



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