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    dots Submission Name: Trapped In Your Dreamdots
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    Author: intoxicated411
    ASL Info:    14/f/earth
    Elite Ratio:    2.38 - 45/60/28
    Words: 90
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 241
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 545



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       i dont know...i thought of it and wrote it in pre-algebra lol...enjoy!!!


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    dotsTrapped In Your Dreamdots
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    I've been in the dark
    So many times before
    And youve broken me so much
    That youve left on me a mark

    Youve left me in this room
    That is so secluded
    My heart is in your plan
    That is so deluded

    You tell me your sorry
    You tell me more lies
    I believe you over and over again
    But you still smother my cries.

    Is this really the end?
    Is this the end of your scheme?
    I might just stay here forever
    Trapped in your dream.




    Submitted on 2005-08-30 21:48:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      really good wirte and well written er... lol dont no what else to say about it other that really its following what everyone else is doing but still really gr8
    izzi x
    | Posted on 2005-09-05 00:00:00 | by fallen_angel384 | [ Reply to This ]
      very good i guess we all can relate , its always dark even when the sun shines, ive writen a piece about the same topic "is this real?" to answer i hope it wasnt but im still here, paitently waiting to disapear
    | Posted on 2005-08-31 00:00:00 | by tammytompkins | [ Reply to This ]



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