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Author:	stateXofXmind
ASL Info:	18/F
Elite Ratio:	2.09 - 29/49/21
Words:	109

Class/Type:	Poetry/Depressed
Total Views:	272
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	660

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this oen is pretty much about my mom,i was a cutter and she was the biggest thing i cut about...im getting help now to deal but im ok.

You

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I'll tell you something you don't know,

Tell me you care and I'll say you lie,

Tell me you love me and I'll walk away,

because if you did care and you did love me

why would you hurt me so much, and make

me do the things I do.

Because of you I am the way I am.

You made me like this,

you made me, you will never know the times

I cried because of you.

You will never know.

Makeing myself bleed over you, it's not

worth it,

Your not worth it.

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  you really need to talk to your mom about all this how can she know how you fell if u never talk? really glad ur getting help and r ok really gr8 write and uniwue style
bye 4 now
izzi x
| Posted on 2005-09-05 00:00:00 | by fallen_angel384 | [ Reply to This ]
  You need to have a discussion with mom. This poem is simply reaching out, but it isn't really original. In fact, I think its more painful to read this than it is to cut yourself.

Go find mom, and drink some milk or something.

MyX
| Posted on 2005-09-02 00:00:00 | by MyX | [ Reply to This ]
  This was very expressive and simply but well-written.

I'm glad you're getting help for your cutting. I hope the help enables you to accept responsibility for your actions and for who you are. I don't know what went on in your house or how you were treated. What I do know is that no one can "make" you behave any way that you don't want to behave. And the power to change the way we are is within all of us, though sometimes deeply buried. I wish you luck. mae
| Posted on 2005-09-01 00:00:00 | by mae | [ Reply to This ]

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