Description: Okay... Im an amature...
this took me about 15 minuets...
im not in a really inspirational mood today...
so it's probably not as good as it could have been... well.... enjoy i suppose.....
Life's a bitch -------------------------------------------
A life less ordinary
plagued by strain
the darkest empathy
on the soul be stained
and on an orchid tree
there grows a peach
striving to remind you
life really is a bitch.
When finally death comes for me
I've got nothing to fear
I've seen the peach that grows
on this orchid tree
I've walked the world in silence
I've seen the giant leech
It told me to remind you
Life really is a bitch.
The craze has taken over
there is nothing to gain
the world is left in pieces
the people left insane
I'm tired of all this walking
my feet can walk no more
i start to feel exhausted
my lips begins to twitch
i see my true self lying
in a shallow ditch
and still the lips do move
and still the lips do preach
Striving to remind you
Life really is a bitch.
Depressed, want to die?... think tehres nothign else in life that could make u happy?... well give it time and try ur hardest to be at ur best... Care for others always without excpecting anything in return(this worked for me)...then again it could be i believe in God.. it helps.
Well as for the piece.. freestyle i like it but plz if lines r gona be a bit longer in teh future try commas... for clarity Do peaches grow on orchid trees?.. hmm dont worry let the peach fall and flourish on its own grounds(hopefully this helps if i knew what u meant) Dont have much time sry
Submission Name: Life's a bitch
for clarity