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    dots Submission Name: H.E.A.T.H.E.R.dots
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    Author: halopop
    ASL Info:    25/f/FL
    Elite Ratio:    4.24 - 167/141/21
    Words: 198
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Longing
    Total Views: 404
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1227



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    dotsH.E.A.T.H.E.R.dots
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    Have you ever had a name
    run through your mind like a breeze
    whistling endlessly creating confusion
    unending frustration of questions

    Even the sound of someone's voice
    bouncing through your brain making
    every voice the same pitch, the
    same tone, the same echo, of her

    Always the same sound that's heard
    the same vision when my eyes close
    at night even when they're shut
    nice and tight ready for slumber

    That smile that seems to haunt
    me throughout the day and
    every minute of every second
    her voice is all that is heard

    Heat is felt from the touch
    of your hand on my skin just
    inches within my very spirit crying
    out for more, but my heart is still sore

    Endless thoughts parade through my mind
    will it be my time to shine in someone's
    heart or is it my time to take a number
    and sit, wait, and be patient...

    Run through my secret garden of
    unknown territory and take off my veil,
    let me shine in your presence, stop this
    echo from carving holes in my soul...




    Submitted on 2004-04-15 20:15:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      wow... i reals like this... i LOVE the last line about echoes carving holes... its awesome!
    | Posted on 2004-04-15 00:00:00 | by Someones Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      okay, lady... i am quickly becoming a fan of your work. i just may have to start stalking you! someone's name running throught your mind like a breeze--what a great opening! i have been there again and again... i love the way that you write!
    | Posted on 2004-07-16 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]



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