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    dots Submission Name: Drug of Choicedots
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    Author: Raivn
    ASL Info:    33/f/al
    Elite Ratio:    4.28 - 1222/916/231
    Words: 144
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    Description:
       I going through withdrawal. I'm ADDICTED!


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    dotsDrug of Choicedots
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    I have the most incredible buzz,
    Intoxicated by the smell of your skin.
    I close my eyes and drink from your lips,
    Lost in this once again.
    I'm stoned out of my mind,
    Because you touched me there.
    You seem to be getting a contact high,
    From the smell of sex in the air.
    I'm going through withdrawal
    For the sheer pleasure of your touch.
    I'm afraid that I'm addicted.
    I've never wanted you this much.
    Then you touch my face,
    And bend me to your will.
    The taste of your lust is a bitter temptation
    That I swallow like a pill.
    You take me in your arms,
    Cover me in your heat,
    The sensation of release
    Has never been so sweet.
    You make me moan and scream
    Until I have no voice.
    Your body makes me high.
    You are my drug of choice.




    Submitted on 2005-09-01 10:09:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      well theres a drug that everyone should be addicted to. this was a realy good poem.ah if only i were so addicted. love hasnt been so godd for me but i think now ive my high and i like it. this poem is going on my faves list.

    ~Gena~
    | Posted on 2005-09-05 00:00:00 | by luvy | [ Reply to This ]
      This is absolutely wonderful. As a fellow addict I must agree with these feelings- I feel them every time, although obviously in a different manner as I am a guy. Unique in nature as well as content, I found this piece to be quite good indeed. Great job.
    -Q
    | Posted on 2005-09-01 00:00:00 | by TechnoticQ | [ Reply to This ]
      Incredibly passionate ...sometimes the pleasure of addiction is addictive in itself...
    :)
    What better addiction that one of passion and Love ..:)
    This poem suggests someone is having a time of their life...:)
    | Posted on 2005-09-01 00:00:00 | by Sophia | [ Reply to This ]
      Addicted to love... the best form addiction to be had ! I thought your poem was superb. It flowed perfectly from start to finish and I really enjoyed reading it. Very original and very good.
    | Posted on 2005-09-01 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      damn girl
    that was good
    that is probable the best passionate poem i have ever read
    that was amazing
    you described the only addiction worth haveing so well
    im adding this to my favorits
    i think im going to read thin one a fiew more times
    | Posted on 2005-09-01 00:00:00 | by Dark Romeo89 | [ Reply to This ]
      oh [censored], that waz tight. I f there is anything I can relate to it's drugs. I like your comparisons with drugs and love. I cant stop reading it. I think that might be the best poem I've ever read. im touched. :::tear::: lol. YEah, well that waz tight. Keep up the good work.
    | Posted on 2005-09-02 00:00:00 | by Drea | [ Reply to This ]


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