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    dots Submission Name: the beatnik poetry of his bodydots
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    Author: fallingingreen
    ASL Info:    18/f/missouri
    Elite Ratio:    3.56 - 136/141/34
    Words: 1720
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 2220
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       the full title is the beatnik poetry of his body and our love.


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    cheekbones..

    solid..

    a frame for the perfect he is

    nose..

    eskimo kisses between touching lips,

    lips..

    traced lightly-

    passionatly-

    sending shivers of ecstasy

    eyes..

    holding me in..

    pure..

    locking the moment

    eyelashes..

    flickering up and down my skin..

    long and beautiful..

    adorning the blue of his soul

    skin..

    soft and warm..

    pressing close..

    tasting..

    feeling..

    becoming one..

    tongue..

    twisting around mine..

    teasing..

    currupting innocent kisses into wanton hunger

    ears..

    hanging onto every breath..

    every whisper..

    feeling the flick of the tongue

    and sending the heart into skipped beats

    heart..

    pulsing beneath groping embraces..

    drumming along with precise rythm to mine..

    a meter to the symphony of our lovers dance

    neck..

    fragile and open to

    the lips devine touch

    hands..

    sliding along skin..

    careful and ruff at the same time..

    feeling every inch of every crevice..

    massaging..

    grabbing..

    holding..

    leaving the space in the air non-existant

    stomach..

    hungry for something other than food..

    belly to belly..

    losing all sense of reality

    butt..

    underneath clenching fingers..

    meeting with love handles to hold him closer..

    leading to the

    back..

    strong in a form of masculine beauty..

    shoulderblades and spine..

    the muscles of these words..

    nothing without the

    arms..

    keeping me safe in a lock of entertwined limbs..

    tight holds to keep away any threats

    legs..

    pumping to thrust him closer..

    harder..

    yet still

    soft like a slow melody's way of rising to climax

    hips..

    grinding against hips..

    back and forth in a choreougraphed sort of way..

    falling skin in a V..

    straight towards the..

    penis..

    where words and thought no longer live





    Submitted on 2005-09-01 13:26:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This was very interesting anatomy class. I enjoyed it all the way. All I can say is that I wish I wrote something like this. I tried few times but never succeeded. But you certainly did. You managed to describe a body without too much clarity. You speak of the body through the way it makes you feel. Emotions and passion are well mixed here. It started gently, slowly heating ‘till the end.
    And also title is great.

    | Posted on 2005-09-19 00:00:00 | by Poly Jean | [ Reply to This ]
      This is so damn sexy! I like this [censored]! This is what I'm talking about! I like this! It contains the passion that two lovers really share when they are alone. Feeling that nothing else is there not even the atmosphere around you. This is hot. This is essential. Congrats!

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    | Posted on 2005-09-01 00:00:00 | by xtremegentleman | [ Reply to This ]


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