This was very interesting anatomy class. I enjoyed it all the way. All I can say is that I wish I wrote something like this. I tried few times but never succeeded. But you certainly did. You managed to describe a body without too much clarity. You speak of the body through the way it makes you feel. Emotions and passion are well mixed here. It started gently, slowly heating ‘till the end. And also title is great.
This is so damn sexy! I like this [censored]! This is what I'm talking about! I like this! It contains the passion that two lovers really share when they are alone. Feeling that nothing else is there not even the atmosphere around you. This is hot. This is essential. Congrats!
Submission Name: the beatnik poetry of his body
