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    dots Submission Name: A.E.S.D. {for adults}dots
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    Author: pj5
    ASL Info:    37/f/IOWA
    Elite Ratio:    4.25 - 40/41/10
    Words: 169
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 220
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       very weird. just a moment of dreams.lolol.


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    dotsA.E.S.D. {for adults}dots
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    A.E.S.D.

    Here I sit in contempt,
    waiting for your sweet scent.
    I sit here and wait,
    sooner or later you will__take my bait.
    I see you everyday,
    wondering what you will say.
    Now curiousity got the best of me,
    so now you will see.
    I must have your soft touch,
    I want you so much.
    I love__your sweet smell,
    by my quivering lips can you tell?
    Your strong hands touching my thighs,
    look for the lust in my eyes.
    Your tongue softly pleasing my desire,
    this moment is reaching the depths of fire.
    My legs are trembling for your harness,
    strap me up lets have some roughness.
    Give me your hard heat,
    this lust you can't retreat.
    You know you want it as much as I do,
    come on baby go get the too_too..
    I can grab the whip,
    play the music I'll do a strip.
    OH MY.....
    All this exotic dreaming,
    what is the real meaning?








    by pj5




    Submitted on 2005-09-01 13:37:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Dreams are the royal road to the unconscious... so this is your real desire? I wish I was ablt to dig up what mine are, but fear they would be much filthier :) I liked the way you worded this peice using desire and heat instead of nautghy words gives it a little imagination. I don't think this is too much though- could be raunchier yes definatley. It also doesn't really need the warning- I have read much worse sh*t on this site that didn't warn of explicit content, anyways we like it.
    | Posted on 2005-09-01 00:00:00 | by dawnschild | [ Reply to This ]
      I remember Freud, explicating his theories of dreams, and I accrodingly agree that all superb fancy occurs while we're unconscious. Very sexual read, and at the same time its finding the inner peace within. Just like Walt Whitman convey his meanings the same way. It can be taken as a sexual relief and as a manifestation of the happiness within. The wording is harmonius as it is erotic, very sadistic while keeping a joyous tone :-) Nice work there, Now I'll come to the conclusion of having venery myself.
    Keep up the good stuff
    Yours
    Alexis
    | Posted on 2005-09-01 00:00:00 | by YoungWerther | [ Reply to This ]



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