Very short and sweet. I felt like I was lifted up and carried away. Like we should take life as it comes and not fight against it. You have it down in just a few words. This is great writing. Keep up the good work.
beautiful! don't fight the waves, just go with the flow... reminds me of riding the rapids on the American River.. what fun! i love the "rose petal boat," it's a wonderful image you've left in my mind.