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    dots Submission Name: Float Me A Riverdots

    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 46
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 609
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       A river poem - a nature poem - a love poem...

    Love,Peace,Joy!!! tif ; )

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    dotsFloat Me A Riverdots

    Float me down
    the waters
    on a rose
    petal boat

    Color me the
    hues of
    roaring sunrise
    and christen
    me of Love

    As winged guide
    glides with

    We ride, not
    the waves

    A float
    on the river
    of freedom

    Submitted on 2005-09-01 13:54:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Very short and sweet. I felt like I was lifted up and carried away. Like we should take life as it comes and not fight against it. You have it down in just a few words. This is great writing.
    Keep up the good work.
    | Posted on 2005-09-01 00:00:00 | by Poetic Cure | [ Reply to This ]
      Live your life to the full and search for peace and tranquility in your life. That is the message I got. Very well written. A short poem with a big big message.
    | Posted on 2005-09-01 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      beautiful! don't fight the waves, just go with the flow... reminds me of riding the rapids on the American River.. what fun! i love the "rose petal boat," it's a wonderful image you've left in my mind.

    | Posted on 2005-09-01 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]

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