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    dots Submission Name: Granted-Revisiteddots
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    Author: Sophia
    ASL Info:    24/f/delhi
    Elite Ratio:    3.64 - 145/131/58
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angst
    Total Views: 266
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 480



    Description:
       Just venting...:)
    This is a revised version...


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    He thinks the world will bow at his feet
    He'd better not treat me like a sheep
    for I am truly a tigress
    I will hunt all day if that be the need
    And my ego his blood shall feed
    I can kill and devour
    And with a vengeance shall i strike
    And crush his might to dust
    for he has failed to hold my trust
    He thinks he still has me enchanted
    He will have to pay, he must
    For taking me for granted




    Submitted on 2005-09-01 14:30:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow this is good. Yes you are angry and yet strong minded. Good going, dont let anyone take you for granted. We all deserve respect. Good write. Keep up the good work. Thanks for sharing with us.
    | Posted on 2005-09-01 00:00:00 | by Poetic Cure | [ Reply to This ]
      A lot of power and focus. It was really good, hard hitting and if he read it, I have no doubt that it would make him think twice. Also a sound message on the last line - in this life - take NOTHING for granted ! Well done I enjoyed reading it.
    | Posted on 2005-09-01 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      u go girl!
    this is good and hard hitting.
    you show your anger brilliantly,
    and your description is realy good too.
    nice write
    x x x x
    | Posted on 2005-09-01 00:00:00 | by secret kisses | [ Reply to This ]



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