Where writers get inspiration is translated as soul
Great thoughts come from within as the story is told
What being can define poetry or give it its shade?
Who better than the writer can interpret a page?
All writers are very different having distinct plots
No man can knock the work for they're not from that "writer's block"
Never seeing the things the pen transfers into script
And when it's spoken the emotion transfers from the lips
When I was 12 years old I took my first sip
Alcohol made me fall...I guess I took my first trip
I then landed on the corner with a bag full of herbs
And took the same stuff to school that I had on the curb
It's a memory I transfer to my bag full of words
Such as biased people I meet with a bag full of slurs
Thus encouraging the collaboration of two
We take the stories from our blocks and we bring them to you
And the things I see on my block no longer shocks
Dude gets shot...I grab my pen and remove the top
Then I jot down my thoughts as they flow from the head
Finish the piece as the blood finishes flow from his head
yo this looks like another fave. it's like i found a gold mine when i hit up ur page. i guess i gotta read munchie's verse now. "Then I jot down my thoughts as they flow from the head Finish the piece as the blood finishes flow from his head" aiyo these were my favorite lines. peace x
dang this was good brian.. i enjoyed reading this.. it was so true and written well.. i enjoyed the way you started it out.. and the way you ended it.. good job man... im glad to see you still doing it...
Wow- 1st I liked how my assumption about the title was proved wrong...I liked the line about biased people w/bag full of slurs; then the repeat with bag full of herbs. This is just the beginning of the tightness of this cool poem. Fun collaborative idea, and THANK YOU! Keep it up! BTW, did you know this Cherokee poet I like named marilou awiakta has one of Tupac's poems TATTOOED on her forearm? Cleo
I havent read the second part but I TOTALLY agree with you. I have a hard time criticizing those who are brave enough to bare their souls to us. I can understand what you are talking about. I say good show, and if the second half, is half as good, it will be great.
umm yea this wuz ok umm im really just writting this to get points but other wize it wuz really good u knw for real doe um keep it up and ill responce to u later alrite then peace love and afro greace fo eva u knw wut im sayin yea anyways umm so and yea talk to u later
HA! Funny how we all seem to come from the same block in some sort of way shape or form. And your words ma friend...always seem to trancend. Always liked your style. Just a one time A-hole thats stepped it up to a higher level like me...but we still know how to be lil devils when we gotta, ya know? Hee-hee. Nice job X...nice indeed. Have a good one and keep blazin'.
Damn bro, I like this piece. I just GOTTA add this to my favorites list, I know exactly what you're sayin' in each line man. ;) This has to be one of the tightest pieces I've ever read man, keep it going.
I can't say it quite like LiLi did, but I'm way impressed with both these submissions...you guys compiled coalated whatever very well.. This is very nice, I liked each bit from the two of you - alone & together this pieces are very good Nice job Lisa
Yo Yo Yayo! This sht is mad crazy B! For real! This is soooo exciting! I am glad that we did this! We needed to! I am glad that the beef is gone and we worked it out! You have always been my boy on this site since day 1 and at times...even friends will have differences!
Submission Name: WRITER'S BLOCK: VERSE 1
