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    Author: mistakes
    ASL Info:    15/f/ the shadow realm
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 16/56/6
    Words: 55
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
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       i read once that flowers are a topic of great poems so i wrote a poem about flowers.


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    flowers of crimson
    flowers of white
    blooming in darkness
    blooming in the daylight.

    flowers that open
    in the warm summer air
    flowers so bold
    flowers so fair
    flowers that shine and dance
    in the pale moonlight.

    flowers of yellow
    flowers of blue
    blooming in my heart
    as i give it to you




    Submitted on 2005-09-01 16:21:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Flowers
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    flowers of crimson









    flowers of white







    blooming in darkness






    blooming in the daylight.

    flowers that open







    in the warm summer air
    flowers so bold








    flowers so fair








    flowers that shine and dance
    in the pale moonlight.




















    flowers of yellow
    flowers of blue







    blooming in my heart
    as i give it to you










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    | Posted on 2006-03-21 00:00:00 | by misty_of_moon | [ Reply to This ]
      this is too sappy for you you shoudn't write things like this because it doesn't belong in your notebook! how could you! are you going soft on me> re you? huh? are you? tell me? you need to go kill someone to make up for this atrocity to your style
    | Posted on 2006-01-04 00:00:00 | by misty_of_moon | [ Reply to This ]
      thanx fo your kind words on thoughts i am glad it made you funny
    writing it was even better of a journey of my soulyou poem is very picturous maybe a little to many flower words keep thinking it will come to you if you use moe imagery you will find other words to use
    good wite and thanx
    sandman
    | Posted on 2005-09-02 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
      Hi, great little flower of poetry, I took out the ing’s, so what’s new. tom


    Flowers of crimson,
    flowers of white
    bloom in darkness,
    bloom in the daylight.

    Flowers that open,
    the warm summer air,
    flowers so bold,
    flowers so fair,
    flowers dance and shine
    in the pale moonlight.

    Flowers of yellow,
    flowers of blue
    bloom in hearts
    they give it to you.
    | Posted on 2005-09-01 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]
      this is great i heard the same thing but i am definetly not the flowery type so you keep writing i will read more when i see them
    becka
    | Posted on 2005-09-01 00:00:00 | by boo boo | [ Reply to This ]


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