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Submission Name: Flowers dots

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Author:	mistakes
ASL Info:	15/f/ the shadow realm
Elite Ratio:	2.65 - 16/56/6
Words:	55

Class/Type:	Poetry/Nature
Total Views:	220
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	390

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i read once that flowers are a topic of great poems so i wrote a poem about flowers.

Flowers

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flowers of crimson
flowers of white
blooming in darkness
blooming in the daylight.

flowers that open
in the warm summer air
flowers so bold
flowers so fair
flowers that shine and dance
in the pale moonlight.

flowers of yellow
flowers of blue
blooming in my heart
as i give it to you

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  Flowers
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flowers of crimson

flowers of white

blooming in darkness

blooming in the daylight.

flowers that open

in the warm summer air
flowers so bold

flowers so fair

flowers that shine and dance
in the pale moonlight.

flowers of yellow
flowers of blue

blooming in my heart
as i give it to you

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| Posted on 2006-03-21 00:00:00 | by misty_of_moon | [ Reply to This ]
  this is too sappy for you you shoudn't write things like this because it doesn't belong in your notebook! how could you! are you going soft on me> re you? huh? are you? tell me? you need to go kill someone to make up for this atrocity to your style
| Posted on 2006-01-04 00:00:00 | by misty_of_moon | [ Reply to This ]
  thanx fo your kind words on thoughts i am glad it made you funny
writing it was even better of a journey of my soulyou poem is very picturous maybe a little to many flower words keep thinking it will come to you if you use moe imagery you will find other words to use
good wite and thanx
sandman
| Posted on 2005-09-02 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
  Hi, great little flower of poetry, I took out the ing’s, so what’s new. tom

Flowers of crimson,
flowers of white
bloom in darkness,
bloom in the daylight.

Flowers that open,
the warm summer air,
flowers so bold,
flowers so fair,
flowers dance and shine
in the pale moonlight.

Flowers of yellow,
flowers of blue
bloom in hearts
they give it to you.
| Posted on 2005-09-01 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]
  this is great i heard the same thing but i am definetly not the flowery type so you keep writing i will read more when i see them
becka
| Posted on 2005-09-01 00:00:00 | by boo boo | [ Reply to This ]

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