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Author:	mistakes
ASL Info:	15/f/ the shadow realm
Elite Ratio:	2.65 - 16/56/6
Words:	68

Class/Type:	Poetry/Longing
Total Views:	213
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
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pay close attention to the poem and it's title because they hide the clues.

Searching for You dots

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whispers echo,
shadows of voices i once knew
but now as desolate
as the rooms in this house.

spectors flit, the briefest reflections.
in the dusty mirrors, long-gone friends
lost, like the warmth of your hand
gone, like the breath of your soul.

eyes glare from portraits
watching my every move
as i pace the dusty floors
that once sparkled in candlelight
but do no more.

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Author: mistakes
ASL Info: 15/f/ the shadow realm

Elite Ratio: 2.87 - 16/46/6
Words: 174
Class/Type: Poetry/Death
Total Views: 55
Average Vote: No vote yet.
Bytes: 1366

Commentary type requested: Thoughts
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Suicidal Children
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suicidal children
with glowing red eyes
sit bloody and bleeding
waiting for the Reaper
to come sweeping by
so he'll take them
away from their pain
and release them from
unimaginable shame.

suicidal children
with such empty gazes
lie unloved and alone
no one to hold them tight
no one to call their own
no one to whisper
everything's gonna be alright.

suicidal children
filled with anger and fear
walk dark streets
hearts heavy with despair
hiding themselves in the night
knowing nothing's alright.

suicidal children
with razorblades and pills
where others find sin.
they find justified thrills.

suicidal children
left by themselves
eyes shining with pleasure
as the blood streams to the floor
laughing in twisted joy
as the paramedics close the door.

suicidal children
with eyes glowing red
crying in the darkness
overcome with fear
whispering they're sorry
over and over again
but no one will hear.

the suicidal children
look up and then disappear
the monster in their head
finally got the best of them.

| Posted on 2006-03-21 00:00:00 | by misty_of_moon | [ Reply to This ]

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Author: mistakes
ASL Info: 15/f/ the shadow realm

Elite Ratio: 2.87 - 16/46/6
Words: 174
Class/Type: Poetry/Death
Total Views: 55
Average Vote: No vote yet.
Bytes: 1366

Commentary type requested: Thoughts
[ Recent comments given by mistakes. ]

Description:

Suicidal Children
-

suicidal children
with glowing red eyes
sit bloody and bleeding
waiting for the Reaper
to come sweeping by
so he'll take them
away from their pain
and release them from
unimaginable shame.

suicidal children
with such empty gazes
lie unloved and alone
no one to hold them tight
no one to call their own
no one to whisper
everything's gonna be alright.

suicidal children
filled with anger and fear
walk dark streets
hearts heavy with despair
hiding themselves in the night
knowing nothing's alright.

suicidal children
with razorblades and pills
where others find sin.
they find justified thrills.

suicidal children
left by themselves
eyes shining with pleasure
as the blood streams to the floor
laughing in twisted joy
as the paramedics close the door.

suicidal children
with eyes glowing red
crying in the darkness
overcome with fear
whispering they're sorry
over and over again
but no one will hear.

the suicidal children
look up and then disappear
the monster in their head
finally got the best of them.

| Posted on 2006-03-21 00:00:00 | by misty_of_moon | [ Reply to This ]
  nothing mattered i nthis world of gloom
no surise no sunset
no crystal moon
you said it was for the best
but what do you knwo
you never say the splendor
of a world without doom
all you ever saw was tyhis white room
you never felt the kiss of rain t
the toopuch of sunlight on your cheeek
ytou never felt the moonlight
as ut danced on the water of a creek
all you ever loved abnd all you ever say
was put into your head
by the ones who want us dead
the ones who killed our world
and sent us to a place
that was no place at all.

blue on the water

misty eyes reflect

the terror

of a gripping deatyh

on the floor of the maSque

tyhe seeping of red blolod

on a thin leather glove

d

the death of love

andd the birth of everything that never wad
| Posted on 2006-03-20 00:00:00 | by misty_of_moon | [ Reply to This ]
  i cna't believe i'm doing this again, but of course i really don't use this account and this is the only real use for it, i suppose i could try to use this one sometimes but it's so tiring to kepp up with two accounts and to keep them both on the same level but then again...oh hell let me continue where i originally started i need to use you againg to get my recip. back up so i can post a new poem so uh, if you ever have any problems i will surely do my best to help, that is if i can. i mean i'm no super hero and i can't get you the goood napalm but i can get you three cases of c-4 i mean only if you wanted it of course, i'm not impying that you want to blow up the white house or anything, yuou know just if you wanted it.
| Posted on 2006-01-12 00:00:00 | by misty_of_moon | [ Reply to This ]
  hmmm, it thought this interesting strange ,really strange, maybe you could be a little more enlightening to what happened here, or quite possible make it longer with a lot more detail, bbecaise i found it increasingly vague

maybe

you will

listen

to me

maybe you wont

it

is

totally

up to

you
| Posted on 2006-01-04 00:00:00 | by misty_of_moon | [ Reply to This ]
  hi, your right very good, ill read the other two you have posted, my pleasure is your read, thans. tom
| Posted on 2005-09-01 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]
  Rather sad but also rather confusing. Easy to relate to however which makes it apeal to many more people. Very good write.
| Posted on 2005-09-01 00:00:00 | by tokillthedead | [ Reply to This ]
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hehe nothing just being inclusive.
| Posted on 2006-03-22 | by inspirit999 - [ Reply to This ] - [ PM ]

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Hey Misty, thanks for catching up on the recent posts, I'm glad you enjoyed.

much appreciated, as always

be happy

Graeme
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| Posted on 2006-02-25 | by inspirit999 - [ Reply to This ] - [ PM ]

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where tha hellz ya been, little miss...debbie...? yea. hit me back. peace~p.j.
| Posted on 2006-02-23 | by Aknahlij_d 1 - [ Reply to This ] - [ PM ]

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Thank you misty. I apprecioate it greatly. always. I am glad you enjoyed my poetry. You know you would get comments if you would post something.

Love always back.

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