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    dots Submission Name: Where is the peace?dots

    Author: mastermike
    ASL Info:    16/M/NC
    Elite Ratio:    2.68 - 24/31/6
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       This was inspired by a story i heard from a freind about his cousin's service in the Iraq/terrorist war. A need for peace all over the world (not just Iraq) filled my thoughts and I felt like it would be good to write it out.

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    dotsWhere is the peace?dots

    This cursed world
    Is crumbling into peices
    It's falling away,
    Spiraling down like a hijacked plane
    Headed for doom, without a doubt
    The passengers, people of the world
    Decieved and not knowing
    The danger we are all in
    War is on, hearts are off
    People are dying
    Goverments are lying
    Where is the peace?
    All wars must cease!
    People must know
    Whats really going on
    Before it's too late
    We need more people to cooperate
    To keep this world spinning around
    We must save ourselves
    From ourselves

    Submitted on 2005-09-01 18:38:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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