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To my baby


Author: Drea
ASL Info:    18/f/nowhere
Elite Ratio:    3.79 - 289 /142 /53
Words: 65
Class/Type: Poetry /Romance
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I wrote this for my baby. Cuz everyone think I dont care bout him. Well... Fuck ya'll.


To my baby



Waz up???
Just writtin to say hey
I wanted to thank you
For makin me feel this way

I get up every
Mornin with a reason to live
I know that you'll love me
even when I have nothin to give

Well... I got to go now
I dont have much time
just wanted to say
thax for always bein mine.




Submitted on 2005-09-02 07:48:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  This poem is so short yet so great.It's definatly a favorite.It got your word out clear and it made me cry.I just absolutly loved it!

[-Candace-]
| Posted on 2005-11-01 00:00:00 | by ArtichokeMosher | [ Reply to This ]
  OMG I love this poem good job I love my son the same way and more. It os cute how u wrote him a letter and how you made it more then a poem! It's a beautiful artwork, I like it alot cause I can relate to him I write poetry about my son ALL THE TIME and love it each time, he inspires me to write as did yours keep it up peace & stay safe...
| Posted on 2005-09-21 00:00:00 | by Cordell | [ Reply to This ]
  I think it was cute. I loved it. It was short, nice to the point, and everything i am not able to write to someone like that. i felt it in my heart i related and it made me smile. just like if it was a note being passed around class. It is awesome.
| Posted on 2005-09-02 00:00:00 | by josymanthegreat | [ Reply to This ]
  That was such a cute and unique way to say I love you to someone. It is short, sweet, and to the point. this is adorable, and so heartfelt. I really think this is great.
| Posted on 2005-09-02 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]


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