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    dots Submission Name: Enoughdots
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    Author: Raivn
    ASL Info:    33/f/al
    Elite Ratio:    4.28 - 1222/916/231
    Words: 174
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 502
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1000



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       I just started thinking, why is it that love is never really enough? This is what came of it.


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    I wish I could say I was responsible
    For the invention of some incredible thing.
    I wish I could say I wrote a song
    That will cause millions to sing.

    I wish that I could change the world
    With just the power of my words
    I wish that I cold fly through the air
    And be as free as the birds.

    I wish that I could write a book
    That everyone would want to read.
    I wish I could make everyone smile,
    And clear the world of greed.

    I wish that I could wave my hands
    And rid the world of pain.
    I wish I could put belief into simple terms
    That I could then explain.

    I wish that I could heal the sick,
    And help the poor.
    I would give anything I had,
    If only I could do more.

    I wish I could give you anything you wanted,
    Fix it when things get rough.
    All I can do is give you my love,
    And hope that it's enough.




    Submitted on 2005-09-02 09:38:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I am interested to know how come such a poem has such few comments and how on earth i could have missed something that speaks a lot about my life?!

    I loved this piece!
    | Posted on 2005-09-03 00:00:00 | by vedanta19 | [ Reply to This ]
      Lots and lots of wishes ! Many of them - you can can turn into reality if you really want to make such a difference. A really good write I enjoyed it very much.
    | Posted on 2005-09-02 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]


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