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    dots Submission Name: Sans Wordsdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 42
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 577
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 378



    Description:
       Happy Friday and prayers to those suffering in the wake of Katrina.


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    dotsSans Wordsdots
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    How can words
    detail
    my innermost
    thought?

    An unknown lesson
    I am
    unknowingly
    taught.

    Wisdom is free
    knowledge
    easily
    bought.

    Truth evident
    not
    necessarily
    sought.

    My net is
    empty
    yet see
    what I've caught




    Submitted on 2005-09-02 12:08:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      You did a great job in writing this.
    Each part has it's own meaning.. yet they all seem to fit together with similar meaning as well. Nicely done.
    I enjoyed it!
    ~Sandra
    | Posted on 2005-10-11 00:00:00 | by Intricate1 | [ Reply to This ]
      Nice work Tiff, for within the emptiness and silence is the love of God. We don't recognize it at first but the light shining in someone's eyes is a clue.

    and I see that as my interpretation, only the bearer of feelings know their content, so this could mean anything..as always, it's a pleasure to listen as you share your thoughts.
    peace and love,
    Nan
    | Posted on 2005-09-03 00:00:00 | by nansofast | [ Reply to This ]
      this is so true and sad but yet so beautiful and you say i'm talented
    this was picture pefect the highest score i can post first or second time i rate will be 5
    hav a great long weekend
    first long weekend home this year
    sandman
    | Posted on 2005-09-02 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
      Many things that we should all hold dear are things that cannot be seen in a net i.e peace, love, trust, truth, faith belief, joy, sadness etc etc etc. A great write.
    | Posted on 2005-09-02 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]


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