Ode by aletha

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Author:	aletha_409
ASL Info:	19/F/Kansas
Elite Ratio:	4.43 - 34/41/10
Words:	83

Class/Type:	Poetry/Comedy
Total Views:	199
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	612

Description:
I was in a rare whimsical mood when I wrote this.

Ode

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How tender and succulent
Your breasts,
So milky white and
A perfect fit for my palms.

I like to nibble
On your scrumptious liegs,
And grasp your thigh
Oh so tenderly.

You cluck as
My hands lovingly
Clutch
Your soft middle.

I have but to reach
For an axe
One swipe and
You will be ready.

To bake
To grill
To barbecue
To fry.

Anything I choose
It doesn't matter
Because you,
Chicken dearest, are born to die.

Submitted on 2005-09-02 15:08:22 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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||| Comments |||
  Yeah this was hilarious... I thought you were a lesbian until the end of the third stanza!
... And then I was like wtf... axe, bake, bbq, fry?!! Lol, good one - this made me have a good laugh.

Nice use of erotic imagery to tie in with your gourmand appreciation for these particular avian's - sucked me right in hahaha.

I make a nice tandoori or butter chicken meal...
*salivates* ....Mmmmmm I'm hungry now lol.

Well, yea.
Peace

Jase
| Posted on 2005-09-03 00:00:00 | by alteredlife | [ Reply to This ]
  Hey! This was funny! Nuff said! When one aims for humor, what more can one say than it made me laugh. That's the highest compliment. Can I ever look at chicken the same way again? Thanks for the chuckles>

Phil
| Posted on 2005-09-02 00:00:00 | by phil askew | [ Reply to This ]
  As i read the first lines i was thinking"im sure this said comedy,maybe should have said love or erotic"then i laughed my head off at the end.Clever stuff liked it a lot :)

Graham
| Posted on 2005-09-02 00:00:00 | by gd66uk | [ Reply to This ]
  mmm chicken. much like induced kitty here I was lead down along the garden path several times with this.. it states itself firmly and a bit profoundly ..from milky white breasts to axe ready ..and then this matter of factly ending ..which is just lovely ..

might have chicken for dinner tonight .. chers

Christian
| Posted on 2005-09-02 00:00:00 | by x-ianhoyskolt | [ Reply to This ]
  Ha ha ha...this is cute and funny! I thoroughly enjoyed this, it made me laugh out loud. At first I thought it was headed to the bedroom, then I thought it was headed for the cemetary, then I found out it was headed for the kitchen! ha ha ha...very very good! cher
| Posted on 2005-09-02 00:00:00 | by Inducted_Kitty | [ Reply to This ]

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