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    dots Submission Name: Got 5 on itdots

    Author: Robbing Hood
    ASL Info:    16/m/Ark
    Elite Ratio:    3.41 - 26/35/10
    Words: 144
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
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       Whats up this is my first Submission. I am the other half of the Abberant Kings that im sure you have heard from maninthemirror also known as Shanx. My name is Robbing Hood, also known as Felony. Tnx 4 Da Time. Hope Ya Enjoyed

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    dotsGot 5 on itdots

    I got 5 on that shit/
    But if your steamed I got 5 in the clip/
    and one in the chamber/
    Its nothin to me but a 85 cent bullet in the head of a stranger/
    I got 5 on that Courvoisier/
    I get drunk till i so drunk i can't hear a single word you say/
    I got 5 on a Big Mack & Super Size Frie/
    Any bitch racist ginst me or my fat brothers can die/
    I got 5 on a quarter sack/
    It puff puff pass now bitch give it back/
    When I got 5 on the mic/
    Ya know I'm rockin it right/
    Wether its verbal or typed/
    Theres not a rapper in sight/
    That do it like I/
    The F-E-L-O-N-Y/
    I told you I do it right/
    Ask ya momma she had 5 on this dick last night/

    Submitted on 2005-09-02 23:44:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      nice gansta jingle,
    kinda gave me a tingle,
    now I'll go line by line,
    and tell ya homies what I find.

    you got five on the s*hit,
    now what is it?
    five on the weed?
    or five for watcha need?
    five in the clip,
    stresses not to trip,
    for you be ready for that game,
    let these fools know your name.

    in the chamber you got one,
    says to me you takiní,
    no chances with that gun.
    now the value of the mark,
    is about the same,
    to the bullet in that head you park.

    Courvoisier man that is whack!
    sharp little bottle of cognac,
    goes nice with tiny green plants,
    but not with that murderer in France.
    rest easy oh Lordy,
    cause homeboy died way back in 1840!

    yeah I know the feeling of getting drunk too,
    been off that shi*t since 2002,
    now its all smokes and caffeine,
    drop the meth habit,
    so now Iím clean,
    if you know what I mean.

    boy I tell ya I love mc Dís,
    oh pleez homies, donít tease,
    or ill have to drive in my piece of crap car,
    and that damn place is two blocks too far!
    those racists you can hit em wit your mind,
    cause you got ill rhymes and plenty of time.
    how fat is a sack these days?
    maybe Iíll start up another smoking phase.

    you got five on that mic,
    I got ten on a biatch I like
    but I think youíll get more action,
    cause im like Jagger with no satisfaction!
    now the rest is fair,
    I like the momma at the end there.
    and homies when you rise above your fight of dissension
    take this mother f*ucka to the next dimension!


    | Posted on 2005-12-24 00:00:00 | by inspirit999 | [ Reply to This ]
      Okay..I am straight up hearing the song...

    I got five on it,
    grab your 40,
    let's get keyed
    I got five on it,
    messin' wit that Indo weed
    I got five on it,
    it's got me stuck and not go back
    I got five on it,
    potna lets go half on a sac


    You did a great job on this though. I could bob my head and get into it. Great job lyrically!

    Much love!

    Li Li
    | Posted on 2005-11-14 00:00:00 | by Munchie_1226 | [ Reply to This ]
      yea i liked it too. It did seem like a battle. I think it was a little rocky but hey that's just me. But yea i liked it you have rapping poetinal jk jk you're already a rapper in my eyes. OMG i just thought of something. but yea this was good.

    | Posted on 2005-11-12 00:00:00 | by Poeticprincess | [ Reply to This ]
      now i know why maninthemirror liked this so much. i liked the way u repeated i got five on that. this seemed like a battle rap kinda, like u'll take no [censored] from anyone
    | Posted on 2005-10-03 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
      ...This is good man...no [censored] I know you the other aberrant king! after all I'm one as well...God Damn!...but yeah...I guess my favorite bars would be:
    I got 5 on a quarter sack/
    It puff puff pass now [censored] give it back/
    yeah...Deuce out...
    | Posted on 2005-09-02 00:00:00 | by maninthemirror | [ Reply to This ]

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