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    dots Submission Name: Shanxxxdots

    Author: maninthemirror
    ASL Info:    17/m/arkansas
    Elite Ratio:    2.64 - 224/318/109
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
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       This is the poooooooooo.....

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    Hey, click, you better move, boom
    I'm mature enough, you just now out the womb
    I'm shanxxx the exorcist,
    I exercise my right as a citizen to be pissed
    so don't fuck with me because I might fuck with you
    By the way, When I say fuck with I mean kill, It's true
    YOur life is hell, and the mirror is calling
    Calling out to you, and soon you will be crawling
    But don't take it from me, I'm JUST your king
    I"m JUST more important than any living thing

    Submitted on 2005-09-03 00:04:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      why are rhymes so short. they're good but it's almost like ur done as soon as u start. i like the the first two lines the most, well actually the first four lines. never stop kicking them high calibur flows
    | Posted on 2005-10-25 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
      BEITCHIN!dude you kick ass!i [censored] love you!**kisses and hugs** this is the best ever! idk why this is so good but it is! yes...i have to admit it J...you are more important than anything...lol! lota love babes!l8r-


    ps...i ried the marijuana...OOWEE!lol!
    | Posted on 2005-09-04 00:00:00 | by Suicidalchild51 | [ Reply to This ]
      Whats up Ninja, you know you my Abberant brother and all but dis poem is sharp, like katana sharp. You did good. Keep reppin them AKs and it'll all be good. Duece N Much love Ninja.
    | Posted on 2005-09-03 00:00:00 | by Robbing Hood | [ Reply to This ]

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