My relationship
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My relationship
You called me a Bitch You called me a whore You played with my emotions You made my heart sore I cursed at you I lied and cheated I kicked you in the nuts And left you defeated You dissed me to your friends Told me to rot in hell You even hit me And made my arm swell I purposely picked fight with you I would pester and nag And even in the halls I sometimes called you a fag You loved and cared for me Even when I did you wrong I remember Freshman year You even wrote me a song Even though I bad-mouth you No one else can say shit And even though I cheated on you Your the only one I fucked with You hold my hand you bring me flowers whenever I'm sick You hold me close and tell me you love every chance you get I tell you I love you and let you know That you mean the world to me and when we have our sleepovers I watch you when you sleep We've been together For years now, going on two Happy Anniversary P.S. I love you. |
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| i really like that becuase its not only the stupid fuking mushy bull[censored], youre showing the hard times not the ones sugar coated. i really like this i cant relate to all of it but i just im just gonna say nice work! xox crazyb | Posted on 2005-11-13 00:00:00 | by crazzybeautiful | [ Reply to This ] | this write made me laugh! but im glad u guyz still found love throughout all that! and like everyone eelse said : I cursed at you | I lied and cheated I kicked you in the nuts And left you defeated that made me laugh to ~akaila evonne~ | Posted on 2005-09-11 00:00:00 | by iluvpoetry_1 | [ Reply to This ] | Gee, you guys were just made for each other, huh? I think this is pretty cool, it seems like you hate each other, and then it's like, bam, I love you. I wasn't really expecting it. Good job | | Posted on 2005-09-06 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ] | really good poem youvegot potential and it shows on thesecond line wats the last word i thought u ment hoe but its a reall god write | | Posted on 2005-09-06 00:00:00 | by crazijessi | [ Reply to This ] | i like this and im glad that you two are back together again although from the writting i didnt think that was going to happen so the end realy suprised me. | I cursed at you I lied and cheated I kicked you in the nuts And left you defeated i also agree with unknown soldier that part made me laugh to. ~Gena~ | Posted on 2005-09-05 00:00:00 | by luvy | [ Reply to This ] | hmm...this is pretty good, a passion poem no doubt, good, but a bit visceral...still good though. Glad you guys have resolved your differences (although I'm not quite sure you have...it doesn't sound like it much) Good write. | Storm | Posted on 2005-09-03 00:00:00 | by OrionsStorm | [ Reply to This ] | i'm glad u 2 resolved ur problems and u stuck it through. it's cool that he was so devoted 2 u. good write. | I cursed at you I lied and cheated I kicked you in the nuts And left you defeated i just thought these lines were funny. i'm sorry. | Posted on 2005-09-03 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ] | i like it even though the writing is very very... coarse sounding for lack of better words. but some poems can pull that off anf this is one that deffinately can. | | Posted on 2005-09-03 00:00:00 | by EEKS | [ Reply to This ] | Love always prevail over tough times if and only if patience comes into play, a vital lesson is dt one of d two in a relationship must play d fool 2 make it a success, but who wants 2 play d fool? | its a nice work, no criticism tho i'll read it over | Posted on 2005-09-03 00:00:00 | by realpassion | [ Reply to This ] | |
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