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VICISITUDES(On A Moon-Lit Nigh


Author: realpassion
ASL Info:    27/Male/Nigeria
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Words: 64
Class/Type: Poetry /Passion
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VICISITUDES(On A Moon-Lit Nigh



How the silvery face
Of the moon-lit night reinvigorates
My dismembered hopes!

Yet too soon will twilight
Spread her misty veil
Over my countless reminiscences
And my passionate night bedevilled with haste.

Memories and Night time,
How so close-knit be thy union!
Cos' dreadful thoughts
Be vanquished under the canopy
Of my moon-lit night eternally...





Submitted on 2005-09-03 10:00:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  This is seriously reminiscent of Shakespeare and a sprinkling of Poe, and all the other writers who both fascinate and confound me. It is pretty, and not many people even try to write in this manner. Kudos for having the guts to do so.
| Posted on 2005-09-06 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]
  i liked this and as a rule i dont perferr the whole thy stuff but hay it fit here i liked it even thugh i tried not to that says something of you i am interseted to reade more of y our work perhaps you will chnage my mind hheheheh
| Posted on 2005-09-03 00:00:00 | by layDsayD | [ Reply to This ]


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